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Hey, Do You Want To Know A Secret? (Chapter One)

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Hey, do you want to know a secret? I'll tell only you. I hear voices… They talk to me… There are a lot of them, but I don't mind… I'm extremely shy, so it's good to have someone to talk to. I can tell you about them; about my friends.

There's a girl named Zadie… She's brilliant, really. And a boy named Moah who is a student of the arts. Moah loves anything artistic; drawing, painting, music, writing, fashion… all of it interests Moah. Then there's Hawthorne, a boy who is quite cynical and pessimistic; despite this, he can be quite pleasant at times. Mayda is a girl who gets along with Hawthorne pretty well, which isn't surprising considering they share the belief that sarcasm is a way of life. Mayda is also very mature and a bit of a bad influence. I love her all the same.

Sometimes my friends visit me in my dreams. Zadie, Moah, Hawthorne, and Mayda talk to me often during the day, but I can't see them. That's where my dreams come in; the four of them come to interact with me like normal friends. I can tell you what they look like.

Mayda is gorgeous… She has long silky black hair that flows down to her hips and big sparkling black eyes, shadowed by rust colored half closed lids ending in perfect thick, long lashes. Her luscious plum colored lips protrude from pale porcelain skin; her cheeks painted peachy in a beautiful contrast to that same paleness. Her body is slender and her limbs are long; all shrouded in black. Her long slender fingers end in nails painted to match her lips. She has the beauty of a model…  That being said, she smokes and has vulgar ideas about men.

Moah has wide, bright electric blue eyes that peek out from under medium length shaggy raven colored hair. His pale pink lips are perfectly sculpted and he can cause tornados with a single blink; those long eyelashes look beautiful against his dark tanned skin. His teeth are perfectly straight and blindingly white. He honestly isn't very tall… probably around five feet four inches. His hands are big, but gentle, and his body is lean and slender. I believe he's Greek… a regular Adonis. In addition to his good looks, he's super sweet. He lights up when talking about anything artistic and he really knows what he's talking about when he does.

Hawthorne has shaggy medium length muddy hair and narrow muddy eyes to match. His face is set in a permanent scowl. His skin takes on a color I can only describe as "rusty cinnamon." Like Mayda, Hawthorne clothes himself in all black… a pair of black jeans, a black T-shirt, and a black leather jacket make up his usual ensemble. He is probably around six feet tall and stands at exactly the same height as Mayda. The two of them resemble each other quite a lot, but that's probably mostly due to their personalities. Hawthorne rolls his eyes so often that Mayda often tells him that "those gorgeous muddy brown eyes of yours will roll back into your head permanently if you're not careful." He usually just rolls his eyes at her again.

Zadie is pretty average. She has a medium skin tone dotted with reddish freckles. Her eyes are russet colored and her hair is brown heavily flecked with rust. She has a dimple in her left cheek and her teeth are just a bit crooked. Zadie stands at five feet two inches, clothed in a T-shirt, jeans, and dirty worn out sneakers; her hair is always pulled back in a ponytail excluding the side swept bangs she's always blowing out of her eyes. She has a lot of common sense and seems to know a lot about the world, though she is too optimistic and positive, which sometimes keeps her from accurately reading a person. Mayda and Hawthorne's pessimism and cynicism cause them to have the opposite problem.

I call them my friends, but I honestly don't know much about them. I don't know their full names or anything about their pasts… They can read my mind, but I can't read theirs; unfortunately, they don't always tell me what they're thinking. I owe them a lot though… They've made me so happy. We have had a lot of fun times together and they help me in my everyday life.

Look at me… Do I honestly look like anything special? If you felt inclined to say yes, even a little, that is proof of Moah's talent. He transformed me… He took me, an ugly girl in baggy clothes and messy hair, and applied all of his artistic know-how.

I have decent grades and have avoided bad situations thanks to Zadie. Mayda and Hawthorne show me the true evil in people, so I've been able to avoid getting near people that would want to hurt me. I'd be a mess without these four angels. Maybe God has sent them to me.

Honestly, I don't know why I'm telling you all of this… Maybe because it's nice to share the magic with another… All I know is I love Zadie, Moah, Hawthorne, and Mayda. I never want to be separated from them… never.
OPINIONS PLEASE!!!
I haven't written in FOREVER, so I'm a little rusty. Dx But I just HAD to do this. I have more information on the narrator, Zadie, Moah, Hawthorne, and Mayda if you want to read it, but I'll need you guys to request it. xD If you want it, the next deviation I post about them will be about what they've gone through together.
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LittleTokio's avatar
i thought it was very good. i really liked it